You SURE about that? |
Ayanti: Stories must begin
well. The first line must be a story in itself. For example, David Copperfield
begins, “I was born.”
Una: You sure about that? As
I recall the first chapter was called “I Am Born,” but the first sentence
actually goes something like, “Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my
own life…” and on into a Dickensian discourse. If you’re looking for a short
sharp sentence to begin a novel, how about Akutagawa’s Rashomon? I think it
opens with one word. “雨” (ame)… meaning
“Rain.” Such a wet beginning.
Ayanti:
I don’t recall that as the first sentence. More like, “A man was waiting under
the Rashomon Gate in the rain.”
Una:
Peut-être. The memory plays tricks.
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Voice-over
The first line of a story
may be short or long.
I cannot find any one-word
sentences beginning a story.
But some are short as in, “I
am an invisible man." Ralph Ellison: Invisible Man. (1952).
Or longer as in, “I had the
story, bit by bit, from various people, and, as generally happens in such
cases, each time it was a different story.” Edith Wharton: Ethan Frome. (1911).
Akutagawa might have begun Rashomon in a similar way as Wharton. This is also known as the Rashomon Effect which is his exploration of four people's interpretations of a violent crime.
Peut-être. The memory plays tricks.
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