Showing posts with label writing style. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing style. Show all posts

Sunday, March 2, 2014

Academic Lite


On rewriting an academic article as a magazine article…
Stephen: Ever cut an academic article back to a magazine article?

Meryl: Yes. You have to think of your audience. Academic articles are for other researchers in your field. Magazine articles could be for anyone trawling through a midden of general articles. Best to scrap the original academic article and start over.

Stephen: I read somewhere, “Identify your audience before you start to write.” Then I read that some other writer suggested, “Forget about the audience. Just write your story passionately.” 

Meryl: A confusion of voice and passion. But both are valid. In a magazine article, you don’t use footnotes or references, it’s more like an essay. You plunge in and tell the story. Cover the five wh words.

Stephen: And the one H word. How.


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Voice-over
Academic articles tend to be longer, more complex, with citations, perhaps peer reviewed. Magazine articles are generally shorter, written simply and clearly for a general audience.

So what is academic lite? Cite a reference and add a table or two perhaps but don’t go overboard and flood it with jargon. Strunk and White principles still apply.

Acknowledgements to a scholar of illuminated manuscripts.
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Thursday, May 23, 2013

From messaging to e-books: Channels and editing


No house should ever be ON a hill.  It should be OF the hill.
Two fusty but feisty academics rue the demise of edited writing.

Ac 01: "I went looking for a quote on architecture. There was the usual wisdom from the greats, like Frank Lloyd Wright saying, 'No house should ever be on a hill or on anything. It should be of the hill. Belonging to it. Hill and house should live together each the happier for the other.' Then there was a bunch of quotes from celebrities, there was one from a some singer who was quoted as saying 'Architecture? Yes, that’s something I like.'”

Ac 02: Huh. I know what you mean. A banal spoken aside gets listed as a famous quote just because it came out of a mouth that thousands of teenagers go to see at a rock concert?

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Voice-over
Dredging through the amount of banal spoken speech recorded as written speech is becoming daunting.

Was something lost when we stopped deciphering the squiggles of print and instead began squinting at digital flickers?

And in writing, does a thrown together salad count for more than a measured slice of sashimi? Is the contemporary digital-driven preference for the short and sharp the victory of the Spontaneous over the Rehearsed?

Perhaps it just depends on where you are looking.

The table below suggests a continuum: informal to formal; short to long, staccato to smooth, bullet points to reasoned argument and creative writing… The medium shapes the message.

message
email
microblog
blog
website
e-book
private
private
public (private)
public (private)
public
public
SMS, WhatsApp, LINE
@gmail, @yahoo, Outlook
Twitter
blogspot
.com
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Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Timestyle


Experienced
Yale grad and Time
editor Briton Hadden
Senior Journalist advises Junior Journalist on writing tricks.
JJ: This story just isn’t writing itself.
SJ: Stories don’t write themselves. WE write the stories.
JJ: Never had a fact that didn’t fit?
SJ: Of course. Dropped it. Story got clearer.
JJ: You never had writer’s block?
SJ: Of course. Wrote myself out of it.
JJ: And after all that writing, how did you edit it back to the seventy words?
SJ: Timestyle. Fleshed out the heroes and villains with adjectives.
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Voice-over
Timestyle. Loaded front-end sentences and neologisms. An outdated style? Even Briton Hadden who was said to have encouraged writers to use expressions like, “Constantly inverted sentences keep busy businessmen on their mental toes,” was using stylistics from Homer.

Parodying Timestyle? Wolcott Gibbs did it first in a 1938 New Yorker article, "Backward ran sentences until reeled the mind … Where it all will end, knows God.”

Could it ever make a comeback? Well, here’s the start of a Time book review from 2011. “Writing her lover’s “autobiography” proved a witty way for American author Gertrude Stein to detail her own life as Parisian writer, salon host and arts patron.”
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