Showing posts with label conversation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label conversation. Show all posts

Sunday, August 16, 2026

Four Seasons: Developing an Alda tale into a Fey play

Back to the original movie... 

1981
Liz: I remember really liking Alan Alda’s The Four Seasons.

Eric: Yes. Three couples, holidays, marriages going slightly wrong, people getting older. No serial killers, no dystopian future, no superheroes.

Liz: And the Netflix Four Seasons series keeps that quality. Comedy, yes, but also about people talking.

Eric: And I think Tina Fey understood that the original film’s great asset wasn't really the plot. It was the ensemble. Exploring those relationships over eight episodes.

Liz: And I liked that she didn’t simply turn everybody into Tina Fey characters.

Eric: Mm. Important. Although she plays Kate, she gives the other actors room. And there’s another interesting thing about the production, the directing.

Liz: You mean the actors directing episodes?

Eric: Yes. Colman Domingo directed an episode, actually directing himself while acting. Tina Fey herself directed an episode. The cast taking over some responsibility rather than simply turning up and performing.

Liz: Tina Fey making it participatory?

Eric: I think so. Her greatest skill isn’t coming up with jokes. It’s creating conversations in which people reveal themselves. Casual dialogue, people interrupting, changing the subject, making a joke because they don't want to answer something, but underneath it there’s something happening.

Liz: Harder to write than a punchline.

Eric: Especially with six characters who have known each other for decades. They need histories. A remark has to sound as though it’s the umpteenth time they’ve had that argument, not the first time the writers thought of it.

Liz: Alda made a pretty good film. Fey had to work out how to make that idea keep going.

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Voice-over
In the original Alan Alda Four Seasons we spent time with people. Tina Fey gives you the pleasure, and sometimes the discomfort, of wondering what happens when people like this have to keep living together after something terrible happens. She kept the essence of the Alan Alda film without simply doing a remake of it. 

Sunday, July 28, 2024

Graveside Visit

At the garden center café…

Sophie: I visited my mother's grave yesterday. I was there alone, and it was so peaceful.

Barbara: Did you talk? I sometimes visit my mother's grave too. It's comforting to talk to her. I like that she doesn't reply; it makes me feel more independent.

Sophie: Well, I sometimes hear her voice. Yes, there's something calming about those moments.

Barbara: Uh huh. It's a space where I can just be myself and speak freely. How was she, your mother?

Sophie: I told her about everything that's happened lately, and this time she, well, just listened. It felt really good.

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Voice-over

Listening is an art. Something you want to be remembered for, even when you’re gone. Maybe people will keep coming to talk even then. So the connection will continue.

Tuesday, June 27, 2023

The heat is intense

Under a tree in the park…

James: Whew, this heat is intense!

Katy: Tell me about it! It’s like we're in an oven.

James: The heat is intense. And look, the people are in tents, too.

Katy: Uh huh. Good one. Better than your usual puns.

James: Maybe the heat helps.

Katy: And maybe we should invest in a tent for our park soirées.

James: Meanwhile our tent is this tree. Natural, if not trendy.

Katy: And no competition, like no tent envy with the neighbors.

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Voice-over

Gratifying that James and Katy don’t overdo the tent puns. They keep the conversational flow going without choking it with too many jokes.

Wednesday, June 20, 2018

A Conversation of Concatenated Cliches


Two old blokes finishing Friday coffees...
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Heinrich: Aach. Going to the dogs, things are.
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Heimi: Life sure ain’t no bowl of cherries nowadays, is it.
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Heinrich: Well, I’d better be making tracks. Time and tide, you know. Forget how it goes.
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Heimi: That’s the way the cookie crumbles. What’s the rush?

Un cafe per amico
.Heinrich: Got to see a man about a dog. Pressing matter, not a moment to lose.
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Heimi: Rescue, huh? A stitch in time? Horse might have bolted?
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Heinrich: Dog. Dog. Keep telling you.
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Heimi: Okay. Penny dropped. Weather might be nice for the weekend again.
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Heinrich: Garden looks dry as a chip at the moment. Report is for cats and dogs. But don’t count your chickens.
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Voice-over
Phrases we fall back on. When words fail us. As they can, if the morning coffee isn’t strong enough to stand up a spoon in.
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Tuesday, April 29, 2014

The Hesitant Electrician

Umming and Ahing…

John Houseman: Can you transport a fridge on its side? Manufacturer warns not to truck on its side.

Hesitant Electrician: Well, er, it’s possible.

John Houseman: I want to move it from my home to my office. 20 kilometers. Takes about an hour.

Hesitant Electrician: An hour, hmm.

John Houseman: It’ll fit in the back of the car lying down.

Hesitant Electrician: Lying down. Ah, yes.

John Houseman: I was worried about the refrigerant or the motor parts.

Hesitant Electrician: Delicate parts, hmm. The motor is on springs. But I think, er, I think you can stand it up when you get there. Leave it for some hours. Umm, twenty-four or so.

John Houseman: So I can carry it on its side. Short distance won’t hurt.

Hesitant Electrician: I’ve not heard – aah, people having problems. After trucking lying down. Much.

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Voice-over
We are accustomed to confident professional pronouncements. Such as, "No problem!" Or "Don't even think about it!" Hesitancy on the part of a professional can make you doubt competency. Or it can guide you to a mutual  conclusion. Particularly when there are conflicting data and anecdotes. Hesitancy may be welcome in a climate of noisy overconfidence.
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Monday, March 24, 2014

Nope Yep

Swift and Sleek
Fast and Furious 
Dissent…

Brian: Great movie.

Betsy: Trash.


Brian: But you like action.

Betsy: Not cars.

Brian: Drift cars are a culture.

Betsy: Subculture. As in subnormal.

Brian: Some would say sublime. I have an idea. Your black Toyota. Paint some red stripes on that and we’d have a Mustang lookalike.

Betsy: Nope.

Brian: You sound dead set against it.

Betsy: Yep. End of discussion.

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Voice-over
Betsy is adamant. She signals this by ending her dissent "No" and assent "Yes" with the unvoiced plosive /p/. An audible punctuation mark. "Nope!" "Yep!" Signalling an incontestable, indubitable, incontrovertible viewpoint. An unequivocal. unarguable, unassailable position. This lady’s not for drifting.

Thursday, May 16, 2013

Interviewer interviews interviewer


Improvising with music, improvising with words…
O: So what are you really interested in?
W: People. I like people. I like to talk.
O: Talk about what?
W: I'm a generalist. Any topic. I like to shape talk. Jazz musicians improvise with music. I like to improvise with words. Play with different juxtapositions. I even feel confident that it’s something I can do. But what do YOU like to talk about?
O. Same. Everything. I do general. But sometimes I wonder if I don't focus enough.
W: The gamut is good. You become a person with broad interests. Doesn’t that make you feel good?
O: Do you have this feeling that we are actually interviewing each other on the same subject?
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Voice-over
Usually interviews run a Q-A-Q-A-Q-A pattern. This one is a little different. It’s closer to Q-AQ-AQ-AQ. They are interviewing each other.

Second, the questions lead to self-introspection and self-divulgence.

A third feature is that the interviewers are mutually supportive and make each feel good about themselves. This develops into a comfortable conversation. It also leads to greater self-confidence.

And on to a successful exchange.

Thursday, May 9, 2013

Conversation and Dance

Tango by Alvaro Castagnet

Cooperative Conversation
She: Talking to you is like dancing.
He: Meaning you have to watch out I don’t step on your toes?
She: No, we both seem to hear the rhythm then move together.
He: Doesn’t everyone give and take in conversation?
She: Not everyone by a long shot. Some people don’t pick up on signals. Others have no timing. Some can’t mirror. Some only compete, they don’t cooperate.

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Voice-over
A lot of talk is instrumental. Business talk. Getting things done. Production and sales.

And some talk is for fun. To charm. To entertain. Like dance.
But conversation isn’t all about showiness on the dance floor.The virtuosos can dazzle with their pirouettes, prances, pas de deux. Their spins, twirls, and leaps. Their frolics, quivers, and jiggles.

Virtuosos, divas, prima donnas.
But it takes two to tango.
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