Showing posts with label rephrasing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label rephrasing. Show all posts

Sunday, January 31, 2010

Reading and Traveling

Frederich, who travels infrequently, is keen on reading books.

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Frederich: A good book can be filled with well-crafted utterances and analyses, from fun to opinion to declaration.

It makes me want to concur, demur and comment. Nod my forehead, shake my ears, and speak my piece.

Woman in the River: An outer oral interaction becomes an inner literary lip-reading.

Frederich: Going into a book is like going on a trip. The linearity and stuttering of listening and speaking is replaced by the random access to rooms of finely sculpted ideas of reading and writing.

In speech we watch the idea being chiseled. In reading we see the idea on display in a gallery.

Woman in the River: You hear me but I wonder if you are listening to me. You make my ideas your own.

Frederich: Possibly. Maybe. I might be.

Woman in the River: You are serially rephrasing again.

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Voice-over

Reading and traveling are parallel ideas occurring in two dimensions. Reading, an activity of the mind, sparks new thoughts. Traveling, a physical activity, sparks new thoughts. Two roads, both leading to Rome.

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Monday, January 25, 2010

If you will

Rolf, intellectually inclined, edits as he speaks.

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Rolf: Every day (I like to, I aim to) I have to (engage in an interesting conversation, have a stimulating conversation) to have an interesting conversation. (This stuttering as I speak, These rephrasings in my speech), This editing (if you like) if you will, is my habit.

wh: But you can’t always find someone interesting to talk to. Not every single day.

Rolf: So then I will (go into) retreat to my study and take a book from the shelf. I engage in a silent dialogue, I read, I (think about it) reflect on it, then want to write. It is (a talk, a dialogue) a conversation between (the author and me) writer and reader.

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Voice-over

A serial rephraser: one who habitually edits as he or she speaks, trying for a more accurate meaning, a finer phrase.

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